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Playboy Model.

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Playboy Model.

Sweet sensual skin
wears scruples thin
until you see your own true sin.

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  1. Date: 7/15/2010 9:51:00 PM

    No win for this one?? What the heck?? Me LIKES

  1. Date: 7/14/2010 11:17:00 AM

    So much truth shared up the inner destruction of the soul with this type of life. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for sharing this message with us and for your kind comment. Hope the Twins start playing better than they have recently. Pitching! Yikes! Karen

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 6:46:00 PM

    Quite a profound thought, Gerard. The exterior cannot camouflage the beauty within. One for my favorites. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 4:29:00 PM

    Love the 'S' alliteration throughout this poem, Gerard...much wisdom shown here also...Great combo of funny yet serious...VERY hard to pull off but you nailed it! - Tim

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 9:00:00 AM

    Excellent write, good luck in the contest. Caryl

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 7:46:00 PM

    Thankxxx ..Gerard.. u are like my guardian angel for letting me know about that typo.. appreciate.. my fingers are really quick on the keyboard and lots of the entries were typed on my neat cell phone with keys barely big enough for a muchkin..haha.. appreciate your kind encouraging remarks too.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 7:41:00 PM

    I could detect the humor with serious thought. Good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 4:13:00 PM

    BINGO Gerard.. a Grook if ever I read one and so up to the current times .. good luck in Charles's contest.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 3:53:00 PM

    Oh wow...this is terrific, Gerard!! "wears scruples thin"....what a fantastic line!! Love this! :)

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 3:04:00 PM

    Hey, this is actually a short but sweet Grook. I think Charles might just like this entry a lot~Chris