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Dear King-

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Dear King-

# oi KING Mandalay

Influence by the element of air,
You had me at love’s first stare.

Ruled by the element of your water,
Emotions no one can slaughter.

You call upon me like a charmer,
Awaken me out of my outer body armor.

A cobra memorized by your romance,
With a trance of my belly snake dance,

I love your built confidence,
Flirtatiously lost in a hypnotic trance.

Sending a kiss to your sensitive toy,
One day you will be my silly boy.

Your dots fill up my sensual desire,
My passion adds burn to your fire.

I will add water to your thirst.
Motivate me; energize me, until I burst.

While the moon changes your mood,
Your key turns on my womanly jewels of nude.

All my emotions are out of control,
You roll me with the sweet dice of your soul.

A deep erotic ritual to feed the need.
Wanting more arousing the power of my greed.

I will aimlessly satisfy your pleasure of lust,
A loving environment absorbing the devils exotic dust.

Symbolizing our emotions and likes on the same level,
Your Cancer sign comes all twisted like a Tasmania devil.

Influencing the justice with my right hand muffet,
My Libra sign set on two strings like a puppet.

I will shove the love in to everything we speak of,
Secure my bloom with the wings of a dove.

Spoil me with your pride, and charisma of your heart,
Fantasize the beauty of the nature of our art.

Longing your slight touch with a hint of aggressive,
Around you I bury myself in the world of imaginative.

Your sign and element your gift thrives on me.
I exchange the feelings only you see.

Observe me; connect me, until you got my balance,
Have me, love me, and give me all your romance.

All though your ego gets in the way of truth.
My sweet love;-)  you are still the one I choose.


By: P.D.

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  1. Date: 3/19/2014 10:02:00 PM
    PD What a wonderfully romantic and sweet write. Full of passion and romance. The love in your heart is overflowing. Thanks for the great comment on my Magical Years poem. Hugs

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 8:53:00 AM
    Congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 11:53:00 PM
    Excellent and beautiful piece,PD.Great write.I love the rhymes and concept. This shows class and dexterity.Congratulations on your well deserving win.XOXO..

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 4:13:00 PM
    so NOW I see how you won. OOh lalala. Congrats, PD.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 3:24:00 PM
    Very nice. There's lot of passion in it. Good job.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Congratulations. Amazing write... Very amazing.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 11:16:00 PM
    Congratulations, PD, so deep and wide ... impressive ..

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 4:28:00 PM
    Outstanding, PD. Congrats on a well deserved win. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 4:28:00 PM
    great write and win PD...congrats

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 8:49:00 AM
    Ahhhhh Love !!! Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 8:43:00 AM
    Sweet win, PD!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 8:03:00 AM
    Wow, awesome write, PD! Congrats! :)

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:30:00 AM
    Hello my dearest sis & friend PD! My big big congratulations!! I'm so soooo happy to see you as grand / first place winner here! Oh, my! This chain of couplets is real exquisitely fantastic and lovely! I've missed it but so thankful that I've read it now. I extremely love this! Superb one & to my most favorite! Thank you so much! Love and biggest sweet hugs,;)) Leo

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:20:00 AM
    Many congrats on your fine win PD!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:11:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Pd xx

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 12:50:00 AM
    Great write:) congrats on your win -Sadaf

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 2:09:00 PM
    Well you covered a whole lot of emotion and sensory stuff in this one P D, pleased to have found one I have not commented on before.."

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 1:10:00 PM
    The lady knows who she wants and how to paint him in hues of words and figures of speech ... great poetry, PD

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 7:49:00 PM
    SOUP MAIL...luv..

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 8:05:00 PM
    Aww! How sweeet! You know I i did read this but I was saving some of my notes for the contest. I hoped you enjoyed what I wrote. I had fun writing it. I'v got plenty more. And yeah I carry those undog markings proudly. The more I post the more you read the more you'll know how I got them and what they are. Was I right about anything I said??? Lots of Luv L.L

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