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                                                   Slowly,
                                                   on the man face,
                                                   tears slide through painted flags—  
                                                   the son fondles his Dad's hand and
                                                   accepts




: ) Inspired by Argentina vs. Germany (4-0) in the 2010 World Cup Soccer... : (

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  1. Date: 9/21/2010 8:38:00 PM
    Rueben, Aprendi tu lengua en la escuela secundario. Cuatro anos y aprendi casi nada. En la universidad, mejore pero no mucho, pues gane un 3.9. Como es posible? Tengo verguenza de escribirte como ahora porque aunque Espanol fuera mi "major" en la unversidad. No podria aprender muy bien el aspecto de "entenderlo" cuando alguien me hablaba. 8 anos, y escribo ASI como ves aqui. Que disastro. Hace 35 anos que practico. Es sorpresa si me entiendas! Abrazos! andrea

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 4:42:00 PM
    great write...

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 11:41:00 AM
    373 reads Goodness I wish that many would bother to read me...sigh...I always smile when I see you've read something of mine! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 8:08:00 AM
    Tnx for your comment on my 'WHERE D0 WE BELONG?'poem dear Ruben,I miss your poetry so much,the soup isn't the same without you,smile :)Cuchi!

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 3:28:00 PM
    A lot captured in limited words

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 1:25:00 PM
    Such an emotional write, Ruben! But, honestly, I wouldn't cry for football...I guess men take it harder. Anyway, why aren't you posting lately? What have you been up to? We're waiting for a new poem, you know...:) I just hope everything's alright with you. ~Emily

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 1:26:00 PM
    Soup Mail for you, Ruben!

  1. Date: 8/25/2010 2:29:00 PM
    Another great one Ruben. Haven't seen you for a while, maybe that is my fault. If it is sorry. You really stun me sometimes with insight. Charles

  1. Date: 8/24/2010 11:18:00 PM
    sorry I don't understand it since I know NADA about the world cup. I take it their fav team lost! So glad to see you back here, Rueben. Luv, Andre

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 3:05:00 PM
    Ruben, my crew @ my deli all are from Mexico...so we were saddened (but expected it!) when they lost!...I won the betting pool with my pick of Spain! so I got to pick my flavor of tres leche' cake for our celebration! (pineapple) the world cup was cool this yr! so sad about yer Country's loss! (but they were great!) cool, human Cinquain! jimbo

  1. Date: 7/30/2010 6:03:00 PM
    Everyone is on summer vacation from the soup?? Have not seen any new writes from you my friend...are you ok??

  1. Date: 7/27/2010 9:55:00 PM
    The ending is abrupt but open ended, accepting indeed, or welcoming if you get my drift. I found it intriguing and evocative, nice write.

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 7:48:00 AM
    Missing your poetry, Ruben! Thank you for commenting "No Beer but Whisky" and your congrats! All the best my friend!...Gert

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 3:22:00 AM
    Well, you got further than we did, and deservedly so. England played terribly. A very visual and poignant write ~ Sharon :)

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 2:53:00 PM
    i started to bet against that octopus! but if i did the results would have been just the oppisite.

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 11:17:00 AM
    Thank you for your sopportive comments on my last, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 7:21:00 AM
    Hóla mi amigo Ruben! Very well written, my friend, my compliments! I am not a real soccer fan, but also watched the match on TV. Didn't like the final betweent Spain and the Netherlands, too much fowl play!!! Muchas gracias por tus comentarios y congrats, here it is very hot with temps aof 37, 38 °C in the shade! All the best and have a great time!!! Tu amigo Gert

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 6:34:00 PM
    pretty good!

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 10:24:00 AM
    soup mail reply,papito-mamita. . .

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 12:51:00 AM
    Papito..I can feel the disappointment..watch those warm tears. .but Argentina are the greatest still aren't they?sad sad verses,make me wanna hug the guy :)And the octupus,let's cook it:)punishment! Glad you posted again Ruben,Mamita.

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