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Sea Angels

Sea Angels

I walk the ocean sands
and wade among the waves.
I see an angel in motion
dancing on the foam.

This angel swirls and dips
the tutu fans with lunge; 
Ballerinas in mid air
Or wings of glossy jell.

Fragile form yet vile
Like love you've had awhile.
Beautiful, yet stings
Jellyfish at the beach.

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  1. Date: 7/19/2010 8:11:00 AM

    Congratulations Jeralynn on your well deserved win in Susan Mill's contest "Jellyfish at the Beach". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 8:09:00 AM

    Many congratulations Jeralyn on your win in Susan's fine contest >> James

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 4:56:00 PM

    Awesome imagery and creative use of language, Jeralynn. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 3:30:00 PM

    Congrats Jeralynn on your winning poem in the Jellyfish contest with this awesome write .. never thought of them as sea angels but u gave new meaning to them with this poem.. enjoy your fantastic win.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/8/2010 8:16:00 PM

    Yes they are quite beautiful when they are moving throught the water-Horrible stings though! Good Luck!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 7/8/2010 7:58:00 PM

    I never thought about jellyfish this way... but you are right on.... Very good poem!!!!!

  1. Date: 7/8/2010 6:02:00 PM

    Excellent description of this spineless creature that stings so well. Nice read.