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Doublee Bleu (reversed-verse)

create
for me a song
so blue, that doves dare swoon
'pon gentle breeze, hear elfin cries
swallowed
~
swallowed
'pon gentle breeze, hear elfin cries
so blue, that doves dare swoon
for me a song
create

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  1. Date: 7/8/2010 1:52:00 PM

    cool on both the verses..P.D.

  1. Date: 7/7/2010 11:44:00 AM

    Very good on both meaning ...Very romantic feel ...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara