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The lost ship

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The lost ship

It's been down in the ocean for many many years
Drowned and lost family members so many tears
Now filled with lost treasure and a story to tell
The people on that ship went through pure hell
From the moment it was sinking they knew it wasbad
Thinking of their family members at home knowing they were sad
the ship only leaves memories of time gone by
All we have left is photos to look at and cry


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  1. Date: 7/7/2010 4:51:00 AM

    Nice poem, I like to see them rhyme, well done. Constructive comments - line 6 is too long (in my opinion) spoiled the flow a little family members is such a long phrase. Still a nice poem though