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Below is the poem entitled Unforgotten which was written by poet David William Breidenthal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Unforgotten

I've captured you from death's snare,
While others were unaware
No more worrying,
You are unforgotten

You are alive
Others deny it 
Well, I know...
You are unforgotten
In my memory
You are unforgotten 	

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  1. Date: 7/14/2013 12:19:00 AM
    Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 9:28:00 PM
    Amazing words..! congratz for being featured this week.. ~shirley

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 7/7/2013 10:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's me on my sister's account by accident LOL!! HAHAHA - J.W.E.
    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 7/7/2013 9:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANKIES! I'm excited. :DDD
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 9:27:00 PM
    Dear David, You are showing YOUR True POETIC Talent in this Superb POEM "Unforgotten" It's amazing How YOU forged this (Special ) person into YOUR Memory and gave Grace when others did not. I'm going to assume Laura is older; but that's an old man's perspective.Your Comment is much more Positive. I look forward to 16 more POETIC MasterPieces from YOUR Laureatus POETRY.(Not tonight though) I will be back to read more of YOU in a day or two. It has been great meeting YOU LOVE ALWAYS and

    Esquire Avatar HGarvey Daniel Esquire
    Date: 3/12/2013 9:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 12:39:00 AM
    Sweet poem David. Remember you are unforgotten. loving you always, Laura

  1. Date: 7/9/2010 11:31:00 AM
    Ah, saved by an angel! The awesome fluttering wings which no one hears. Certainly, the world has always denied miracles as mysteries, only if they care. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 2:24:00 PM
    Thank you for the uplifting comments. You all have a nice day. Welcome to Poetry Soup Diiamond & others who are new to Poetry Soup! I have about 16 poems done with and I'm looking forward to showing them off to the world XD.

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 4:37:00 PM
    Those we love do live on in our memories. Surely, others don't feel their presence, but as long as you do, this person will remain "unforgotten." Well done, David! Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 2:49:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 2:45:00 PM
    Great short write...Keep the pen flowing.Sara

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 2:42:00 PM
    you captured them from death: you saved someone, you stopped someone from death? this person is something to you while the other don't even give them a name very interesting who ever you are to this person you are a good one to have near