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Celene Crescent
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The girl with the guitar
On the strings of love,Soft fingertips are playing,Music in her heart.
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Gert W. Knop
Date: 7/12/2010 9:07:00 AM
What a sweet Monoku, dear Celene! Just beautiful!!! Thank you for your kind comments and have a great week!...:) Cheers, Gert
James Fraser
Date: 7/10/2010 4:05:00 AM
Sweet tender words Celene, have a lovely weekend >> James
Sharon Tideswell
Date: 7/10/2010 3:20:00 AM
Simply beautiful Celene ~ Sharon :)
Joseph Spence Sr
Date: 7/9/2010 11:23:00 AM
This is just wonderful. I like the essence of the piece. My finger tips are getting tough since I am now playing every day. Great job! Joseph
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 7/8/2010 4:11:00 PM
Where is she? hope all is OK with u my dear sweet friend.. miss u so much.. am leaving islands tomorrow ..a 17 hour plane ride home.. miss my family and pets so much..my babies.. as much as I miss my friend.. did u see the vacation photos yet? with luv..
James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/6/2010 4:50:00 PM
beautiful! Celene! jimbo
Joshua Lacey
Date: 7/6/2010 1:24:00 PM
is lovely to me! :)
binibining P.iNk
Date: 7/6/2010 3:54:00 AM
This is just beautiful Celene--Why is it that I am reminded of Audrey Hepburn here, singing Moon River? Made me smile actually to think that--I just love Audrey Hepburn ^_^ --thanks for that :) haha sure wish I knew how to play any musical instrument though!! I'm hopeless when it comes to music --nikko :)
Grace EunSong Lee
Date: 7/4/2010 5:06:00 PM
Guitars and love... Romantic poem :)
James Peranteau
Date: 7/4/2010 3:48:00 PM
You did it "Corva" ! This is a "Monoku" in which I've waited for ! *smiles* ! You go ! Awesome ! To mine favz ! james
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 7/4/2010 1:45:00 PM
U sound so down .. luv is around .. don't wear a frown.. wear luv's crown.. my dear sweet friend.. thankxxx for your wonderful remarks today and always.. we are attempting to lava surf soon.. Ron thinks he is 25 rather than 55 ..omg.. willl update u .. AlohA...
christopher marcum
Date: 7/4/2010 1:08:00 PM
--enjoy this unique and rare gallery of contemporaries finest of poetic arts by, a lady whom most surely seems to be herself, one of the most beautiful and gifted diamonds that, histories corridores and these my eyes have, ever beheld, since the beginnings of time...."So Very Very, Beautiful!!"....have the most beautiful and brightest of dreams, "Beautiful Celene Cresent!!":) love always to you, christopher ~ smile, see you next time, bye dear lady!:)
christopher marcum
Date: 7/4/2010 12:59:00 PM
--but what i can do and just did is, make this exquisitely brushed masterpiece of beautifully soft and tender poetry, a favourite of mine! smile, you know, everyone of your priceless souls creations which i have been so blessed to have viewed thus far, have all been humbly placed amid my faves and, that makes "You" 1000% perfect--wow--remind myself to come back time after time again to--cont:)
christopher marcum
Date: 7/4/2010 12:49:00 PM
smile--this is such a beautiful poem of a precious heart and souls deepest reflections--i believe that this is the fourth or fifth of your wonderful verses which i have read thus far and everyone of them are, completely spellbinding and amazing, to say the absolute and very least--smile, i would make your splendors a fave poetess of mine but, i already have and you already are--cont:)
Diiamond Rich
Date: 7/4/2010 10:26:00 AM
Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/4/2010 12:01:00 AM
hey, didn't I respond to this one before? But I do not see my comment. anyway, so nice this one and thanks for that really cute story you told me of the topless beach! Luv, andrea
John Rhinem
Date: 7/3/2010 4:56:00 PM
.... ~ Smile, until we meet again, "Amid Another 'Mid Summers Dream," let "Your Beautiful Heart" never stop playing nor swaying unto, "Those Musical Strings Of 'Beautiful Love'" ~ "My Love 'To You Always,' From Upon 'The Wings of Angels,' Unto, 'The Ends Of Time, Beautiful Celene Cresent,'" John!'" ~ Smile, "Have A Beautiful Tomorrow, 'Precious Tinkerbell,'" Bye!:) ~
John Rhinem
Date: 7/3/2010 4:45:00 PM
.... ~ Smile, "Ow," and before I forget--I noticed "Your Brilliances" latest brushings upon "Your Precious Painting" from yesterday ~ Smile, again, the textures; the pastels; the colours; the beauties; never escape these eyes, which have always seen, "Your Magnificence!!!" ~ Smile, one day, I surely shall stand with, "'Your Radiances Splendors,' Upon, 'Zions Streets Of Gold'" ~ ....Cont....
John Rhinem
Date: 7/3/2010 4:37:00 PM
.... ~ Smile, you know, "I Love This Beautiful Verse" ~ "Just As 'I Shall Always Love, The Beautiful Poetess,' Whom Penned Such Soulful Words!!!" ~ Smile, I am a long running fan you know....Smile, and I believe that I shall be, until the day which I die; "Forevermore" ~ Smile, I am extremely glad to see "Your Precious Heart," amid such a state of happiness it seems; and I can only pray, that these joys for "Your Tenderness," shall never cease ~ ....Cont....
David Byrne
Date: 7/3/2010 4:36:00 PM
very nice
John Rhinem
Date: 7/3/2010 4:29:00 PM
.... ~ Smile, I had to go do a quick typo dear but, did I not afore mention unto "Your Beauty" that, whether I am early late of right on time, I shall forever be with "You" within this life and, there to hand "Your Majesty 'A Rose,'" amid whatever colour it may be; dipped within, "A Love's, 'Eternally!!!'" ~ Smile, this poem reminds myself of a poem I read, just yesterday ~ ...Cont....
John Rhinem
Date: 7/3/2010 4:09:00 PM
.... ~ Smile, thus, just in case, "Your Beauty" is asleep or not--Smile, "May 'Your Beautiful Dreams' Be Filled, With 'The Cresent Cup' Of Overflowings, 'Love & Beauty,' Which 'My Soul' Shall Forever Wish, For 'The Deepest Of Your Beautiful Heart!!!'" ~ Smile, I hope that "Your Splendors" day was filled with joys of happiness that, shall only mark the beginning of, "An Endless Rainbows Love Laced Path" ~ ....Cont....
John Rhinem
Date: 7/3/2010 3:59:00 PM
Smile ~ "The girl with the guitar"....Smile, "On the strings of love, Soft fingertips are playing, Music in her heart." ~ Smile, how very soft, tender & beautiful ~ Smile, "You" always have been soo very beautiful, dear....Smile, "Hello My Dear Gifted & Beautiful, 'Beautiful, Celene Cresent!!!'" ~ Again it is getting late I see and, I would wish to tuck "Your Treasures" in again as always, my sincerest of hearts has ~ ....Cont....
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 7/3/2010 3:05:00 PM
Got u a little trinket my friend.. when I get home to New Jersey.. u can send me your mailing address and just a token of my loving friendship to u .. so loyal and true are u to me.. with luv.. from the "Sweetheart" ..AlohA..
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 7/3/2010 2:08:00 PM
And I hear every note ..every line .. every word.. every sound.. I feel every piece of the string .. its LUV playing.. my dear sweet friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. home July 11th..AlohA
Joseph Spence Sr
Date: 7/3/2010 12:14:00 PM
This is such a wonderful Monoku. I like the flow of the words and the essence of the message. One set of fingertips are getting calloused, whilst the other is floats with soft picks on the strings. The music is certainly lovely with all the fragrance of a rose. I like the images in this poem and the inward thoughts. Great job! Joseph
