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Break Up

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Break Up

The door you closed behind,
The love you left out blinded.
It’s me, who’s crying out loud,
It’s you who’s looking so proud!
Such love I could not find…

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  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:22:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "A Valentine Limerick" contest Celine. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:33:00 PM

    Celine~~wow,,, this one is a late one... a super and wonderful congratulations.. with your valentine limerick * good night. :-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 7:29:00 PM

    Well penned Limerick with nice images, Celine

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 12:21:00 PM

    This is okay and I like the flow of the words. The message is also right on point. Great job! Joseph