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Hatred

Hatred is a worm,

                           That eats from the inside out...

                                                                      Leaving you hollow.




                                                                      Timothy I. Brumley

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  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:28:00 AM

    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 8:24:00 PM

    Timothy we need a poster board sign with these word on it.. big and bold.. perfect..my friend.. and your blog was great .. and i left a comment..I hope u enjoy.. and gotta go now as my LUV is here for the weekend... see u on Soup tomorrow.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/10/2010 10:11:00 AM

    You have many "truisms" here!

  1. Date: 7/2/2010 5:42:00 PM

    Dude!!! Man you're right on the money. I just love it, right down to the core. Tell them about love in your next one. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 7/2/2010 10:15:00 AM

    And an ugly worm it is, Timothy. You describe that "hollow" feeling very well in your senryu. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/2/2010 8:42:00 AM

    A nice Senryu with fine thought

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 9:26:00 PM

    Very strong Senryu....these few words give an excellent depiction and summary of hate.

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 8:29:00 PM

    how true this is,, enjoyed your write..P.D.