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soup girl

the perfectly polite lady
who gracefully writes me daily
whom i hope i will one day applaud
when she reads us her poetry abroad
the sister I've always wanted
the same ever since she started
she's said many prayers
and she'll always be there
to miss her is my brokenhearted
my words to her are special
we meet on the  very same level
and sometimes i say
in a some sweet way
"she's mine" when the day is special
her words are furniture
in my heart
and flowers in vases
and art
the beautiful scenes
the stars in between
the clouds floating apart
the warmth the fires glow
the great spirit from with in that flows
the someone that is
when i needed a friend
heavens answered prayer



(To my favorite soup girl Carolyn Devonshire;)

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  1. Date: 9/2/2010 8:20:00 AM
    Great write expressing your thoughts about Carolyn..I have cooked some soup for you and it is done..Sara

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 7:55:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Carolyn has some superb friends who wrote for her in this contest. Glad to see this in the winner circle. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 11:28:00 AM
    Congrats John on your winning poem in the poetry pal contest ... enjoy your special moment in the winner circle.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 11:18:00 AM
    Congratulations John iii on your win in African Asset's contest "Praise your poetrysoup pal". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 10:28:00 AM
    Big congratulations to you on your wonderful win in my contest, thanks for the support. You a simply a super Souper! Don’t drop your passionate pen, keep writing! With love, always, Adeleke

  1. Date: 7/14/2010 6:32:00 AM
    Caroline is one my my best friends too,very special person.. My sister too:)so that makes you my brother John:)..Lovely tribute to a great woman//Celene

  1. Date: 7/6/2010 5:37:00 AM
    great trubute!!

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 10:12:00 PM
    A sweet and loving dedication coming from the heart. The Lord always answers prayers and starts friendships where he thinks it will blossom and grow. Beautifully expressed John. God Bless you friend. Phyl

  1. Date: 7/2/2010 10:41:00 AM
    A very moving dedication that expresses your warm friendship so beautifully, John. You should enter this in the "Soup Pal" contest! Blessings and love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 10:39:00 PM
    Sweet devotional dedication.

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 10:02:00 PM
    john, is this who I think it is. YOu should say her name at the bottom. yes, she is a wonderful friend to you. THis is an awesome poem! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 4:03:00 PM
    A beautiful poem and dedication John, you are such a sweet man. She is such a lucky soup girl, 2 have such a devotinol friend. Loved your poem.-Skat

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 2:36:00 PM
    Nice poem John. More comments in Soup Mail. Joe

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 2:02:00 PM
    such a sweet dedication to your dear friend,, lovely and thoughtful..P.D.