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...spiders of color

spiders of color
exploding in jet-black sky...
fingers reach and fall

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  1. Date: 7/13/2010 6:59:00 AM

    A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 11:00:00 AM

    Congrats on being featured this week. Rhonda Hero

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 9:48:00 AM

    Great write that deserves to be front page feature..Congratulations..Sara

  1. Date: 7/7/2010 8:45:00 AM

    congrats on the feature poem and enjoyed reading your work!!

  1. Date: 7/6/2010 8:19:00 AM

    Congratulations Steven on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/6/2010 3:57:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Steven. May you have many more features. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 7/6/2010 1:05:00 AM

    I missed reading this before but wow-- this is really amazing--loved that first line of yours! --congrats on you win, Steven ^_^ --nikko :)

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 1:31:00 PM

    OOOH LA LA. Great haiku. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 12:33:00 PM

    Steve, congratulations on your winning Haiku! The imagery and details are super unique....really dig the end-line with fingers reaching and falling. Well done~Chris

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 12:03:00 PM

    Congrats Steve, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! Keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 8:44:00 AM

    Incredible descrption of wireworks, Steven. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Lainie

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 9:22:00 PM

    congrats on having this wonderful poem featured this week and your contest win, I really enjoyed this one.

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 7:17:00 PM

    Another honor for this poem today. Wow! Congratulations on having your poem featured. Karen

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 6:24:00 PM

    Congrats Steven on your winning Haiku in the Fireworks contest with this remarkable write to celebrate freedom day .. enjoy your win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Haiaii.. Al0hA..

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 4:14:00 PM

    Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Keep on writing. Enjoy your honor! Karen

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 11:14:00 AM

    Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 5:12:00 PM

    dear poet friend please just add the ... to the end of line 2? (all else is to form!) Best of luck!

  1. Date: 7/2/2010 6:00:00 AM

    Very Nice. Good luck.

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 6:43:00 PM

    Unique pen picture of the fireworks.Good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 12:30:00 PM

    Oh wow I feel slow he he,, I read it like twice, the colorful spiders are fireworks, nice one, clever lol...P.D.