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...spiders of color

spiders of color
exploding in jet-black sky...
fingers reach and fall

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    Diiamond Rich
    Date: 7/13/2010 6:59:00 AM
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    A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.
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    Author Rhonda Kay Hero
    Date: 7/11/2010 11:00:00 AM
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    Congrats on being featured this week. Rhonda Hero
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 7/11/2010 9:48:00 AM
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    Great write that deserves to be front page feature..Congratulations..Sara
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 7/7/2010 8:45:00 AM
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    congrats on the feature poem and enjoyed reading your work!!
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 7/6/2010 8:19:00 AM
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    Congratulations Steven on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 7/6/2010 3:57:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Steven. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 7/6/2010 1:05:00 AM
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    I missed reading this before but wow-- this is really amazing--loved that first line of yours! --congrats on you win, Steven ^_^ --nikko :)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 7/5/2010 1:31:00 PM
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    OOOH LA LA. Great haiku. Congratulations.
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    Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 7/5/2010 12:33:00 PM
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    Steve, congratulations on your winning Haiku! The imagery and details are super unique....really dig the end-line with fingers reaching and falling. Well done~Chris
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    Adeleke Adeite
    Date: 7/5/2010 12:03:00 PM
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    Congrats Steve, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! Keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
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    Elaine George
    Date: 7/5/2010 8:44:00 AM
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    Incredible descrption of wireworks, Steven. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Lainie
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    Francine Roberts
    Date: 7/4/2010 9:22:00 PM
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    congrats on having this wonderful poem featured this week and your contest win, I really enjoyed this one.
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    Date: 7/4/2010 7:17:00 PM
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    Another honor for this poem today. Wow! Congratulations on having your poem featured. Karen
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 7/4/2010 6:24:00 PM
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    Congrats Steven on your winning Haiku in the Fireworks contest with this remarkable write to celebrate freedom day .. enjoy your win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Haiaii.. Al0hA..
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    Date: 7/4/2010 4:14:00 PM
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    Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Keep on writing. Enjoy your honor! Karen
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    Diiamond Rich
    Date: 7/4/2010 11:14:00 AM
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    Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 7/3/2010 5:12:00 PM
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    dear poet friend please just add the ... to the end of line 2? (all else is to form!) Best of luck!
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    Earle Brown
    Date: 7/2/2010 6:00:00 AM
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    Very Nice. Good luck.
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 7/1/2010 6:43:00 PM
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    Unique pen picture of the fireworks.Good luck in the contest
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 7/1/2010 12:30:00 PM
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    Oh wow I feel slow he he,, I read it like twice, the colorful spiders are fireworks, nice one, clever lol...P.D.


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