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life Changing Day

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life Changing Day

Her heart has just said that
It has found the one
That it wants to settle with.
So in anticipation of the day
She will have to hang about
In a life that she would
To a certain extent do without.

For the existence that she previously knew
And dipped her toes into 
Would only make the birth
Of courtship she now desires 
End up in a swell of sand.

She knows that it would take years
For her soul companion
To comprehend that her
Life in now fixed Just for him
And in the closing stages he may not
Agree with the amount of
Selflessness for such an individual,
Thus may even end up walking away
From such a surprising scene.

In her heart she also knows
That the life that she
Lives on this life altering hours
Will never make him even
Imagine of staying, for he has such morals
That just makes her seem to be a stray.

So to that new life that she is going
To set on herself today
She shall at slightest have
The smallest amount of chances
to be in his hands until the end of instant.

This now gives her everlasting hope
To live until that last day.

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  1. Date: 7/1/2010 7:18:00 AM
    Welcome to poetry soup! Hope you have an overflowing well of ideas! to express and inspire us here!

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 5:12:00 AM
    I love how you use the langauge...so fluent,,,great write...^_^ v

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 12:26:00 AM
    Wow !! her life took a big leap of change...and believe it or not,, it will not stop there, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.