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  1. Date: 9/19/2010 10:37:00 PM
    Smile ~ I so very much hope that "Your Brightness" is doing absolutely wonderfully dear &, "Thank You" for "Your Beauties" lovely coms the other day for, they Always mean sooo very much unto myself because, I Always feel the depth of "Your Beautiful Soul" amid "Your Sincere & Tenderly Kind Words" ~ Smile, let me go find another poe! ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, All You Love, Forever," John!:) ~ Smile, on we go....

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 10:25:00 PM
    Smile ~ "This Is 'Sooo Very Beautiful, 'Dear Lovely & Precious, Lynette Chachere!!!'" ~ I was just skimming through "Your Beauties" poes &, I recognized the title of "This Beautiful Diamond" here in regards with one of "Your Treasures" most recent post so, I stopped to view "Its Splendors" once more dear &, "Yes," still as "Amazingly Beautiful" if not more so then when my eyes had first beheld its "Soulfully Beautiful Loveliness!!!" ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 1:42:00 PM
    Very touching poem indeed ! almost made me want to cry.! Great job, and keep on writing! Angela Y.

  1. Date: 7/15/2010 7:31:00 PM
    so imaginative and interesting!

  1. Date: 7/15/2010 2:46:00 AM
    Another beauty, Lynette...If this narrative comes from true life experience I can surly identify! Love the last two lines especially... Your last name is French I believe? Originally being from Cajun country I was just wondering...Have a wonderful day and keep writing! - Tim

  1. Date: 7/8/2010 10:43:00 PM
    You are funny telling me I had a wild mind when you are the one seeing maggots. hahaha. That is really nifty how you met three handsome dark men in one day. OOOH, it sounds lucscious too!! Which one will be your dessert? Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 2:02:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 9:35:00 PM
    Says it all, Love Roger x

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 12:23:00 PM
    ur write iz awesome, very kool B.boy

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 1:04:00 AM
    Lynette thanks for your comments to me today and I hope you get your groove back. Have a great fourth of July weekend, girlie! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 12:54:00 AM
    hi Lynette, here just to read a second time, deep i also love the vessel line a lot. ((my soul had perished from its VESSEL.)) you sure know how to end a sad one well, have a good one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/30/2010 11:53:00 AM

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 9:47:00 PM
    This is really a beautiful piece to read. I like the essence of the words and the storyline. It flows very well and is quite expressive. The ending is really the icing on the cake. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 6/28/2010 10:46:00 PM
    Awesome imagination Lynette. Smile, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 6/28/2010 7:49:00 PM
    Thank you for your kind comment. Look forward to more poetry from you. Karen

  1. Date: 6/28/2010 7:08:00 PM
    A great one too Lynette.. u had me going.. I am in Hawaii with my "honey poo" and we went from the seashore to Paradise in one week as a surprise belated birthday am trying to catch up a few comments... u are so terrific to be so sweet on my poetry reads... wrote 8 new ones for the contests while waiting for "private jet" to whisk us away in the wee hours of the morning.. see u after July 4th ..stay happy and sweet..luv.. from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..

  1. Date: 6/28/2010 5:15:00 PM
    great read!

  1. Date: 6/28/2010 2:26:00 AM
    ouch, Andrea!! haha I'm always here at the Soup too ;) haha --totally agree with you with Lynette--go explore the world some more--and that sure would be fun to get to visit Japan someday--:)you're really smart to also take those classes--I bet you're in a lot of AP classes ;) ---enjoy your day now!!--nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/27/2010 11:35:00 PM
    LYnette, You are FINE to not answer me right away. I realize you are a young girl enjoying her life. Don't be like me, always here at soup. haha. Keep living happy and letting life inspire you to write. LUv ya, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/27/2010 3:22:00 PM
    Wow, this is really great for something written on the spot, Lynette--you sure are talented, very gripping yet sad write and I loved how you ended it --and that sure would have been cool if you got to visit Japan--have to see that place too & you sure got a nice sounding Japanese name--haha my name's already Japanese ;)---and oooh that is gruesome--poor deer! that sure must've been a sight to see! and I guess we all have those times of not liking older poems, I'm the same way-smile! nikko :)