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Celene Crescent
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Sunset's Concerto
Soft wind music plays 0n last harp strings of sun rays Clouds waltz in the sky
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James Fraser
Date: 6/27/2010 6:26:00 AM
This is certainly music I would love to listen to >> James
Joseph Spence Sr
Date: 6/26/2010 9:03:00 AM
This is a beautiful rendition. Unlike my guitar, the harp is such a wonderful instrument. This takes me back to days of sunshine and roses. What a beautiful sunset of joy! Great job! Joseph
John Rhinem
Date: 6/25/2010 12:41:00 PM
Ps. ~ Smile, "Absolutely Amazing, Soft, Creative, Magical, Beautiful, 'Soul Moving,' Poem, 'Beautiful Celene Cresent'" ~ Smile, "What An Honor & A Joy, Beyond Compare, To, 'Know "You!!!'" ~ Smile, "Sweet Dreams, 'Beautiful Lady'" ~ Smile, "Goodnight Dear!":) ~
John Rhinem
Date: 6/25/2010 12:36:00 PM
Smile, so perhaps keep an eye out for this, just another dedication from a poet to, "The Queen!!!!" ~ Smile, I have got to get out of here dear lady but, as was is and shall always be, "It Has Been 'A Pleasure Beyond,' To Be Near 'Your Beauty'Again" And, "My Love 'To You' Until, I Hold The Stars Inside My Palm &, Pour Them, 'Into Your Beautiful & Everlasting Heart, Forevermore,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Beautiful Of Dreams, 'More Than Beautiful, & Beautiful, Tinkerbell!'" ~ "Bye Dear!":) ~
John Rhinem
Date: 6/25/2010 12:23:00 PM
.... ~ Smile, "Masterpieces Of Brightened Brilliance" that, send my soul into the midst of a storms churning, burning, ships at sea; upon the seas of ~ L*O*V*E* ~ Smile, well, again, "Thats 'You!!!!'" ~ Smile, speaking of, I have been pouring upon a canvas the many colours of a souls deepest heart "For 'You;'" yet, due to time and life etc., I shall not have it complete until this weekend I believe; but, as always I merely worry that, "It Shall Be Worthy Of 'Your Majesties Beauty'" ~Cont~
John Rhinem
Date: 6/25/2010 12:12:00 PM
Smile ~ Oops, there I go again, getting forever lost, in "The 'Neverending' Dream" ~ Smile, you know, today upon the coast, it is exactly as "This Magical Painting" here--White brushed skies, amid the deepest of blue--Which makes me "Always," think of "You!!!" ~ Smile, "This," is one of "The Most Beautiful Haikus" that my eyes have ever beheld, within my entire life ~ Its as though "You" have this endless "Gift," of "Endless Colours" that, "Paint Masterpieces, 'Beyond Compare'" ~ ....Cont....
John Rhinem
Date: 6/25/2010 12:01:00 PM
Smile ~ "Soft wind music plays, On last harp strings of sun rays----Clouds waltz in sky." ~ Smile, soo much warmth beauty and love, it seems, to this serene and precious picture here ~ Smile, "You" have always been a heart melter and a breath stealer and, if I close my eyes, I can envision this neons midnight moment of beauty and, see "Your Beauty" within, "Your Sparkling White Cinderellas Dress & I, Softly Holding 'Your Beautiful Hand' &, Gazing, Into 'Your Perfect Caramel Eyes'" ~ ...Cont...
Ruben O.
Date: 6/25/2010 10:06:00 AM
Great images in this beautiful senryu, Celene! TMFs! Ruben.
James Marshall Goff
Date: 6/25/2010 1:52:00 AM
I can hear it! wonderful! Celene! jimbo
Sharon Tideswell
Date: 6/25/2010 12:25:00 AM
Hi Celene, love your haiku, especially those harp strings of sun rays ~ Sharon :)
Raul Moreno
Date: 6/24/2010 5:22:00 PM
Wow, amazing work on this one...it goes to my favs...Raul
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/24/2010 2:14:00 PM
Oh, my, i was wondering where the third line was and all of a sudden, I saw that it had "wafted" over to the far right!! This is awesome!!! A FAV
DE R
Date: 6/24/2010 11:57:00 AM
Amazing imagery here, Celene...well penned~Emily
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/24/2010 9:45:00 AM
Oh, I love the uplifting feeling this haiku provides to readers. Wonderful use of imagery, dear Cuchi! Wish I could have experienced this "sunset's concerto" with you. Love always, Carolyn
sarah hales
Date: 6/24/2010 6:11:00 AM
Beauty from your pen sarah x
Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 6/24/2010 5:43:00 AM
Wonderful picture penned with apt images, Celene
Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/24/2010 5:07:00 AM
Great creativity in this one..Excellent metaphoric language and descriptiveness. May you occupy a "Spiraling Universe" and be filled with inspiration..Sara
Nick Bagnall
Date: 6/24/2010 4:57:00 AM
Very Very good, I can see the sun rays split around the clouds making strings in the air, superb
Juan Paolo Galua
Date: 6/24/2010 3:42:00 AM
oh...you've captured perfectly the fleeting sunset...great write////^_^ v
Anthony Nutter
Date: 6/24/2010 3:18:00 AM
Vivid Haiku, easy to see the sunset.
