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Breathless

 
I smell less when I drink your fragrance
I could care less about what my friends thought when we hold hands.
I touch your skin and all I feel makes me speechless
I feel helpless when I grab your chick
Yet I become lifeless when I kiss your lips.
I could own a PHD but with me in your arm am totally brainless 

You’re hope when am hopeless
You‘re home when am homeless
You’re voice when am voiceless
You’re life and without you am a good as lifeless

I held your waist but still felt touch less
I believed in a lot but outside you I trust less
I say I was changeless until I met you
When I leave your side I become heartless
You are my wealth, my money, and my honey
You are the belly carrying my baby

You wouldn’t trustless if I trust 
You wouldn’t be heartless when am your heart
You couldn’t change less when am permanent
You wouldn’t be touch less if am there all the time
You can never break because the ring on your finger is break less.


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  1. Date: 7/17/2010 4:17:00 PM
    yes ur verse was beautiful Deborah. creative and lovely keep the Good work going

  1. Date: 7/15/2010 5:56:00 PM
    Thanks for reading my verse! Nice to be young and in love! Line 4 I think you want CHEEK? Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 7:27:00 PM
    thanks alot guys i really appreciate the fact that yaaa like this poem hope to comment on yours soon and send more aiight

  1. Date: 6/22/2010 5:30:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poem, Keep up the good work.

  1. Date: 6/22/2010 7:33:00 AM
    This is just excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. This gives me some ideas of things to say at the right time. I can see wonderful images. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 6/22/2010 7:24:00 AM
    What nice and humorous expresseds. I liked the sentence and the last

  1. Date: 6/22/2010 7:10:00 AM
    It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Osazee. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol