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Flesh Huntress

The pricking sun starts to hide
when the stars unfurl their cloaks
The darkness starts to creep this evening
Oh I can feel my spirit rising

I stayed at the corner
And concealed by the dim
As I waited for them
With a see through dress
it reveals my fresh taut breast
and flaunt my crescent hips

Prowling, peering, peeping
like the voyeur moon
Scanning these passerby men
with a filthy eye
Ops, I spotted one!
"Pssst, pssst, pssst"
is an enchanting invitation
from this lovely siren

And I receive a glance
With a wink of an eye
he give in to mine

In my bed I prepared
sheets of smooth linens,
rose spattered floors
like a shattered virgin,
Sets of burning candles
weep my husband's leave
but their lights celebrate
my burning desires

He perfumed me with his breath
He oiled my body with kisses
fluids dripping in my flesh
Giving and receiving
Warm bodies colliding
Flesh against flesh
as this fire we unleash
Riding to pleasure
till we reach hell's depth

I'm a flesh huntress
who craves for flesh
I sling sweet talk
and bait my body
I need not snare
for that is man's desire
Don't dare to escape
As I cast sin's net

This poem is inspired by proverb's immoral woman...I am not pointing to a woman in
general...this is just a particular woman whom I also know....the point of view here is
shifting...

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  1. Date: 7/23/2010 2:29:00 AM
    Deep!

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 5:26:00 AM
    Maybe change can come and good will begin for this person..Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 8:37:00 AM
    to my favs!Celene!

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 8:35:00 AM
    Hey Mr.Juan,couldn't the poem be about a man hunter?I guess nope,It was always Eve!:)Great poem and poor husband,if he treated her well after all. .great work Mr.Juan:)

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 5:39:00 AM
    very interesting write, always enjoyable and well written... keep them comming...Michael

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 3:08:00 AM
    Come into my web said the spider to the fly, sometimes I think all of us men are flies, the women certainly own the honey to lure us in. Excellent write.

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 2:58:00 AM
    Quite a seductress she is, Juan. I feel sorry for her husband. Casting "sin's net" doesn't usually produce the finest catch. She will learn this one day as her physical beauty fades and her spiritual perspectives mature. A very compelling poem. Love, Carolyn