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My First Kiss...

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Below is the poem entitled My First Kiss... which was written by poet Pravallika Apuzzle. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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My First Kiss...

He kissed me gently on my lips
And slickly bite my both the lips

Then he sucked my lower lips
And on his way reached my upper lips

He tilted his tongue into my mouth
Parting my lips one north and one south

He fought with my tongue so hard and wild
And planted a lingering kiss in pride

He went and went on all over
Till his quench for kiss got over...

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  1. Date: 8/17/2011 1:21:00 AM
    Yeah.... I did enjoy writing it!!! Thank you soo much Saurav, for taking in ur precious time and visiting my works. Pls stay tuned !!! With love , Pravs

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 12:27:00 AM
    great feeling...you have enjoyed a lot writing it.....

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 10:31:00 AM
    Thank You soo much Adeleke & Carol

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 11:43:00 AM
    Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke

  1. Date: 8/16/2010 10:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Pravallika. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 11:41:00 PM
    Thank You soo much each one of you... pls stay tuned...

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 8:24:00 PM
    Very good poem and that must have been a great first kiss. Keep on writing ~!~Heather~!~

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 11:32:00 AM
    Wow! That's an awesome kiss. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 8:31:00 AM
    Very passionate poem