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  1. Date: 1/18/2012 9:19:00 AM
    idyll...never heard of this form....There is an enormous amount of wisdom in your state of being....happiness is likened to a flower in full the Bible it refers to life as a today and gone tomorrow...yes, you speak of our vapor so very well..Love reading your poetry, Yas. Always nice to read your inspiring and sincere comments too..just bc our friendship is over the internet doesn't mean it is invisible. Right? ;)

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 9:12:00 PM
    HI, yasmin, I remember this lovely one you wrote on state of being. I love what you say about the state of happiness in it. Congrats on the winners' list. I have a lot of comments to catch up on. my computer was "out of commission for a few days" YIKES!

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 12:00:00 PM
    A lovely thought provoking write Yas ;) congratulations hun.. Love Wilma

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 10:20:00 AM
    Well thought out. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 8:35:00 AM
    Very introspective Yasmin. I enjoyed this. Congratulations

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 6:50:00 AM
    I think I will use this beautiful poetry to stick on my fridge for inspiration, along my calendar of appointments, this will make a pleasant distraction for me, love and light dear Yasmin, vie.

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 6:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on you win in Brian's contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 9:10:00 PM
    Many thoughts in this one, Yasmin. I love the imagery as life likened to a flower. I need to start coming back to these first writes of yours to see ones I have missed! I added to my snow poem. (I had not seen the rule that said 2 - 5 verses needed) Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 7:02:00 AM
    While stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry I would like to thank you for your comments on my poetry. Your words are always appreciated Yasmin. May the sun always shine down upon you and fill your soul with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 1:53:00 AM
    happiness can be given as well as taken away. T. S.

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 3:18:00 PM
    Nice! Good flow and life's bare truth. I invite you read my poem 'THE WHITE SNOW' and will appreciate your comments.

  1. Date: 11/4/2010 4:11:00 PM
    very profound and thoughtful write! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/3/2010 11:33:00 PM
    Hi Yasmin, this is truly an incredible write that led my imagination on a wonderful journey laced with vibrant colors, True happiness is like a flower in full bloom waiting for a hummingbird or a butterfly to suckle its nectar so that they can become one with each other to spread there union with fresh scented fragrances in the air,Thank you for all of your kind feed backs because they have truly touched me in a special way, Have a wonderful weekend. Sincerely Dean

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 6:26:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 6:05:00 AM
    I love the simile and metaphors that you use here for you really captured in words what smile was like so well...I have to read other poet's work...if you got time...just send me a message of a poem you want me to read...I find this poem for instance as interesting...^_^ v

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 5:59:00 AM
    But joy bubbles up from inside and overflow...Excellent write..I enjoyed the descriptiveness of sweet perfume and flowers...Keep the creative pen flowing..I think that I will add this to my favorites..Sara