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  1. Date: 6/19/2010 8:01:00 PM
    good one! enjoyed!

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 1:14:00 PM
    wow, the second line was great word play to depict the homeless situation! Great retrospection. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 12:52:00 PM
    captured very well, enjoyed this one, good luck on the contest..P.D.

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 6:31:00 AM
    A wonderful footle. Good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 6:09:00 AM very brief captured what loneliness felt like...great write...^_^ v

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 6:06:00 AM
    Hi Scott, I like your footle very much. 'empty whole' is a great line. I also think you could use 'soul' equally effectively in your first line. Good luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)