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Ceaseless Orbit

Ceaseless Orbit

Never a pause

In the fluid motion

Of the electric world



Everything from emptiness

Nothing is all we are

But we are still made

Of stars, you and I



No such thing as

Yesterday; tomorrow’s

Promise is ruined by

The eternal present



When life’s flimsy mirage

Is consumed by time

All that is left – if

Anything is left at all



Is the memory of

True unfettered ecstasy

Eternity is found in life’s

Orgasmic moments.

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  1. Date: 6/24/2010 3:09:00 PM

    T.L. I have to concur with Gavin. You have written an exceptional piece here, and my wishes are for it to do well in the Soups contest >> James

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 1:27:00 PM

    Thanks for the comments! I decided to enter this into the July Soup contest *fingers crossed*

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 1:12:00 PM

    I love the way you use your words in this passionate poem. I enjoyed reading it today. Scarlett

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 1:34:00 PM

    Really enjoyed this, brilliant choice of words, why has no one commented this? The best I have read on this website to date. Thanks for uploading. Regards, Gavin.