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Sizzling Summer


Sizzling Summer

Heat hotter than breath.
Gasps squelched while sweat tickles skin,
Flop under the fan.

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  1. Date: 6/21/2010 5:51:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Jeralynn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 9:23:00 PM

    This could be my house at anytime in the summer months. Great write. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 5:07:00 PM

    sounds beyond HOT. Congrats on your win, Jeralynn. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 1:37:00 PM

    Nice use of alliteration and imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 10:12:00 PM

    Kuddos on your winning in Linda Marie's contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/16/2010 9:00:00 PM

    Congrats Jeralynn on your success in my contest with your great entry.. also appreciate your support of my contests.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 9:11:00 PM

    A wonderful thought with nice images. Good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 8:45:00 PM

    As a kid without air conditioning, I remember flopping by those fans. Nice use of imagery. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Karen

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 6:08:00 PM

    You must live near me--it was hot, hot, hot here today. Even the air-conditioner seemed to need a fan. Enjoyed your senryu....Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 5:40:00 PM

    Great one with the required surprise ending. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce