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463 47

there was nothing tangible
not now not ever
reality dwells beyond the stars

perception is a myth
the suffering are simply mistaken
only their thoughts hurt them

true love is a shared experience
as it always was and always will be
but not through a computer screen

this is only my best approximation
a poet struggles to find the words
the feeling is beyond description

words are symbols of symbols
twice removed from reality
we live beyond the stars

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  1. Date: 7/20/2010 1:15:00 PM

    Enjoyed this poetry from you today and will read more, please check out my recent Criminals part 4 and remember.. :) its only a story. Have a great day.

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 10:46:00 AM

    Enjoyed this poetry from you today and will read more, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.

  1. Date: 6/15/2010 8:42:00 AM

    I don't smoke marijuana, Yoni, but it is the only effective treatment for my ulcerative colitis so I wish I had access to THC tablets to relieve the pain when I have attacks. I do understand and appreciate your point of view. I have just seen a lot of people suffer needlessly. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/14/2010 10:00:00 PM

    Yes, Yoni, all we have are words and symbols that cannot begin to approach the feelings associated with true love. Nice to see you here again, even though I will be leaving. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 2:28:00 PM

    Yes we live beyond the stars Yoni!glad you are back!C

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 9:49:00 AM

    beautiful write, "twice moved from reality"..P.D.

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 8:40:00 AM

    Twice removed from reality. I like the expression