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Seek Elsewhere Death!

She,
hung a,
Hummingbird,
Feeder near the,
Window of my room,
So I can look outside,
See life again as God's gift,
And raise my broken spirits up.
She doesn't know how much she gives me,
But I vow to live because she loves me.


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  1. Date: 4/24/2011 1:23:00 PM

    William ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 8:55:00 PM

    Congrats Will on your featured poem this week on P.S. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv.. Happy Easter luv..

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 2:39:00 AM

    great poem I thoroughly enjoyed ! I loved the composition...magnificent

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 12:02:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week William. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 1:05:00 PM

    Well said, Will. This beauty, I will fav! Congratulations on being featured this week on Soup. Yes, live because she loves you. What better gift to give your love one! Have a blessed holy week. God bless. Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 12:23:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, William

  1. Date: 10/13/2010 8:01:00 PM

    william, this was a beautiful piece! how have i never come to comment on it! i was looking through some of my poetry and saw all of your wonderful comments and i apologize for not having come to look through more of your stuff! this poem was so amazing, and powerful. a great piece and well penned. thank you for this, one for my faves for sure. you live in utah? --Madison

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 6:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" William. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 12:57:00 AM

    This is just inspiring, William :) --congrats on your win with this etheree :) --nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 7:02:00 PM

    I love this! Love is life and life is love. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 12:18:00 PM

    What a wonderful view. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Enjoy your success. I wish you many more. Karen

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 7:31:00 AM

    congratulations William. This is beautiful and leaves one wondering. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 3:46:00 AM

    Congratulations, WIlliam, on your fifth place. I LOVED this one. I wished you had not put a comma after every line, but other than that, I think you had one of the most profound messages of all the etheree that I saw in my contest. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 10:21:00 AM

    Nice- feels very lonely...

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 4:02:00 AM

    Great tribute poem to one you love and one who loves you or maybe someone you know..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara