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Humor


I bring humor in their lives,
cause them superior and their smiles,
i tell them them i got only four,
lead them to a laughter with uproar,
only my pocket had a core,
clothes and shoes galore,
inquisitive minds question.... 
where i got i from?,
where i hear it from?, 
where i learn it from?,
they know not... where i come from,
minds have...
curiosity captured,
purity fractured,
reality ignored,
entity forced,
ignorance occupied,
faith ruptured,
with....
arrogance crowned,
innocence frowned,
distress clowned,
I drowned,
on empty grounds,
…...
compassion found,
show me your colors,
know no bounds,
mockery and denial,
misery and survival,
funny and laughable,
crazy and loveable,
ready and available
foolish and palpable,
humorous and humor-able,
quiet and unspeakable,
misty eyes so conveyable,
a humor so unable.

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  1. Date: 8/25/2010 9:30:00 PM

    Very flowing, rinky. I'm glad my first instincts were correct. What country are you with that name? LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 11:03:00 AM

    Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Rinki. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 9:20:00 AM

    The rhyming pattern in the poem certainly flows well. I like the choice of words and the oxymoronic twist in some of the lines. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 6:24:00 PM

    funny write, love it...smiles:)