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Standing People II

Waving winds wrap
round upstretched arms
thick with spring green foliage.

Fat and round
tall and thin
olive and lime
pine green
people the view
with their majestic silence.

Comes a breeze they whisper,
rustle branches, nod,
sway, dancing, bobbing
taking turns
as breeze passes on.

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  1. Date: 6/15/2010 2:09:00 PM

    I love the delicate quality in this poem, Sue. Very nice indeed! Soup mail shortly. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/12/2010 4:47:00 AM

    Great poem, Sue...One can feel the breeze! Thank you for your kind comments and have a nice weekend :)...Gert

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 5:42:00 PM

    Very flowing words Sue and the breeze so pleasant too.. such visual lines and phrases .. so enjoyed such a wonderful creative write..nice u are back .. with luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 12:09:00 PM

    Absolutely beautiful Sue. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 8:31:00 AM

    Oh my......what a gorgeous poem....it breathes quietly. Love this one, Sue!!! :)