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Relationship Epidemic (Females)

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Relationship Epidemic (Females)

I'm now in the 3rd chapter of the Relationship Epidemic as I focus on the role of the female
They say one man's trash is another man's treasure, so my girl is my seashell
Since before time, women were loyal before a man is
The backbone of a family, hello, they give birth to the kids
They rarely get lazy
Unlike men who complain about labor pains, but can't show you the baby
Being deprived of attention is what a woman can't stand
If you can't keep up, they grab another dude by the hand
Females left and right can be lovable
As well as gullible
Giving, receiving, and at times also 
Deceiving
"Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" saying is so true
Bite her first she'll bite back twice as hard shame on you
If there's one thing they hate
Is never being on a date
Never comfortable with a nice night in the house
Because they feel trapped like a mouse
That's what I see with girls that are younger
More likely to look for love in the wrong places to satisfy that hunger
When they get cheated on 
Or beaten on
They can't trust a male so they turn lesbian or bisexual
Love/sex life is more perpetual
That vision can be perplexible
However it makes life more flexible
It's easy to understand why they want the finer things in life
After all who doesn't, it cuts like a knife
They value commitment, its extensive
We all know women are sensitive
All of that serotonin in the brain
Mistrust on her heart, what soap will wipe off that stain
Mothers, sisters, wives bring some of the pain
Aunts, girlfriends, grandmothers turn snow into rain
A female will never love you in vain
They crave attention,  if they don't get it they feel shame
Cheat on a guy and say they're the one to blame
Messed up right?
Do the Right Thing like Spike Lee
No, that's ok girls rather be sneaky
Coretta Scott King, she's so royal
Even after Dr. King got shot, she stayed loyal
Asked my girl if I died, will she get over me
She said not so quick
Replace me? Who will?
That's a different pick
But that's neither here nor there
Good and bad females everywhere
Love attracts girls like plants and meat attracts bears
They can be a man's best friend 
To the end
As well as nightmare
Break a woman's heart if you dare

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  1. Date: 7/7/2010 9:50:00 AM
    Little Brother, for someone so young you've got it covered. Glad you didn't say "all women". That would be stereotyping and wouldn't make sense. Great job. Whatever, don't get cynical, ok? There is someone just for you. Be open and think positive, and never "judge a book by its cover". Just some advice from your big sister. lol Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 11:54:00 PM
    wow, you have many thoughts flying everywhere about women. I think you have had many women in your life, from girlfriends to mom, sisters, etc. I can tell you that a lot of it is stereotyping. I meet many men who act like women. Me? sometimes I defy the norm for women. Anyway, this is very interesting and I hope to see more from you. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 11:56:00 AM
    funny and true also keep sharing.

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 11:34:00 AM
    It was a pleasure to read your poetry this afternoon Richard. Wishing you another day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 3:37:00 AM
    Some great thoughts on the correct way to treat a woman...Keep that attitude and life will be good to you...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Equinox is what happens in nature twice a year where day and night are equal in time....I used the word to say that he and she had meet their equal ....Sara