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Loneliness

It is alone in a field devoid of comforting color.
Surrounded by a sea of incongruous behavior 
choking life from sparse recollection.

Alone as to confirm existence beyond 
the confines of natures ability to balance.

Rooted deeply,
resembles, nutrient poor soil failing to sustain;
panged by malnourishment of 
interaction.

Alone destined to wither and finally, to succumb.
The only survivor, incongruous behavior. 
Loneliness, alone, ever alone.

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  1. Date: 6/11/2010 7:03:00 AM

    Hi Mac, and wow. So feel your words here. Sometimes, too often maybe. I like Dr. Ram Mehta's comment - makes so much sense. Just want to say hi and thank you once again for sponsoring, judging and placing me in your contest. It truly has made my day. Wishing you light and love. hugs, shar xoxo

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 10:01:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Mac. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 9:47:00 PM

    Longing for companionship , a lone mind bleeding~Enjoyed thanks~Rick

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 8:59:00 PM

    Loneliness nices defined. I think loneliness exists in loneliness. Once it is shared, it evaporates, Mac.