Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places



Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

real words

lucious stewart Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled real words which was written by poet lucious stewart. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by lucious stewart

Best Lucious Stewart Poems

+ Fav Poet

real words

Let me blow life into the weakest part of your nature, we can be statues of time but why 
waste the commandments of your dreams. A new life with me is like eyesight to the blind, i 
can numb the pain that once seemed so great. An addiction to success burns failures lust. 
only time will tell if i am your loves keeper. I only long to conquer your physical with mental 
injections of loyalty and sacrifice.your window of love blinds the essence of my soul, am i a 
slave trapped in your hearts well being. Can my romance enlighten the core of your mind, a 
timeframe for healing is at the tip of my tongue. Relax as i command sensation over ur cloud 
of confusion. Im exploding into the highest level of your fantasies hoping to direct yourr path.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 8/9/2010 6:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lucious. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 3:24:00 AM
    Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. welcome to PoetrySoup. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 12:33:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup Family... enjoyed your creative write tonight... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 6:43:00 AM
    This is an excellent prose poem. I like the flow of the words. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing, Blessings, Joseph

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 6:17:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Lucious. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 4:30:00 PM
    loved it. you seem to have my writing style. or least a little part of it. i loved it!