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Paradise Lost

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Paradise Lost

Paradise Lost

Our souls unite, with our ribs.
You are man, I am Eve.
I crave you.
You make me sick.

No - stop. I will not give in.
The power play is useless. 
I refuse to be the servant.
Brevity.

You act like this is charity.
Like time with me, is a gift for the needy.
Walk away, I pave the road before you.
This silly girl, is adored.

Somewhere is the soul who finds me,
Wife material, who will stand by.
While you display your David ways.
You play your harp, I sing your praise.

It has ended. We are Revelation.
The final book has been written.
Here's your sermon.
You lost the right to live in Eden.

Serpents coil at your feet, whisper in your ear,
you listen to the enemy.
Though love stands so near.
Though it settles as a kiss on your brow. 
You betrayed me Judas.

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  1. Date: 6/9/2010 7:34:00 AM
    A very wonderful write with nice images

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 6:46:00 AM
    I like the title and how it is linked with the last lines of the poem. This is very expressive. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 6:18:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rebecca. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 8:57:00 AM
    ENJOYABLE WRITE YOU HAVE HERE -IRMA