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in and out of love

im in and out of love
and its all because of you
biy you give me butterflies
so deep inside
i can't make up my mind
im so confused
don't know what to do

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  1. Date: 6/7/2010 3:04:00 PM

    The rhyming pattern flows very well and moves the poem along. I like the expressions. Great job! Joseph