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EDGE WALKER

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EDGE WALKER

                       EDGE WALKER 

Waking up to the depth beyond such things everyday
One day I choose to walk and become Queen of Mandalay

In the depth of my ocean mind
I Find my soul diving and trying to unwind

Peer pressure can not handle all the empty space
Avoiding the worlds relativistic mass by the human race

Over using the power giving to me
Sleeping at times disappointed by humanity

I walk in darkness to help you reach the light
I twist the darkness to give you a better sight

Walking at the edge of all things with the ability to precept
Using logic to compare and intercept the emotions we can not accept 

With the emotional picture of a fast heart beat
Wiping out the brain waves with a mood in heat

Giving enough flow to the power of intuition
Exceeding the knowledge without the book of Revelation

Receiving the pointless pain in a persons chest
A wreck who ignores the emotions to digest

A mood string of self manipulation eating away at the mass of reality
Some viewers are so unperceptive, a low self esteem of stupidity

A curse a gift with ability to know everything, illusions of feeling it
with an emphasis so useless you can not admit

Trusting one day came with a price, alerting my ego on strong
Using my energy to direct the purpose of the wrong

Walking like a tool threw out the worlds philosophy
A weapon of thought not meant for the mindless or monstrosity

The hidden riddles of life are the ones before your eyes
Grasping the concept with the attention of ending lies in our lives

Proceeding the ethics of the center of ones endless layer
accepting the birth of all responsibility, over the edge of a mind player

I gave the thought with a natural twist of a moving spear
Expanding the horizon of the hemisphere

Edge walkers down and broken standing without
Walking straight forward with the same God and Devil in doubt

Simply looking through "rose colored glasses."
Chaos from the ugliness of avoiding the large body masses

Balancing out the change to allow the flow
follow logical emotions, that destroys a mind blow.

causing the opposite to any action
effect the law of any equal reaction

expect to accept the unexpected, a dull way of life
connect the keeper of the masters weapon knife 

with religion  comes weakness of not standing tall
with the strong perception of life even one can fall

Standing without the generations of a crawler
living as a shadow he or she who believes the edge walker

                       by;p.d. ~June/6/10

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  1. Date: 7/17/2014 7:06:00 AM
    Great write Linda.. :) :)

  1. Date: 5/10/2014 10:11:00 PM
    This is a realistic write great job, very expressive and emotional meaningful work my poetic friend, cheri

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 7:06:00 PM
    There are those that choose the safety of of the middle of the road, then there those that walk the edge to meet the unexpected

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:24:00 PM
    Congratulations, sweet queen of Mandalay!

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win with this thought provoking piece and thanks for visiting. I appreciate your encouraging words. I'm getting my life together and will be here as much as I can. God bless, Rhonda

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 6:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in "Best of the Best" contest P.D . Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 12:34:00 AM
    Most Excellent PD!! I could read this over and over and still glean from it!! I am just gonna have to fav it :) Well done sweetie! Whoot Whoot! big hugs, love ya ~deb

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 10:03:00 PM
    Gee whiz, I wonder what inspired this intense write?...these kinds of tho'ts come from the corners of our hearts and it's rare that someone can so eloquently writethem down....congrats on this placement in a very difficult contest. :) I want to thank u for your support of my poetry also...Your comments were too funny as I read them the other day...thanks PD! Keep writing from your wishing well soul. Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 9:38:00 AM
    Remarkable write P.D.....congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 8:41:00 AM
    you my dear are a cheat since you know this is one of my all time favorite poems. the imagery is both fanstatic as it is morbid. ofcourse it has the stamp of your style all over it. your incomplete sentences that somehow make it more complete which is fitting considering the content nature of the poem. the words you chose to ryhem are awesome my favorite is the crawler and walker. and lastly its full of your crazy metaphors i never get but keep me reading. love you cheater grats on your win

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 6:23:00 PM
    wow.....this is great...so intense..very powerful words my friend......thanks so much for sharing this wonderful couplet.....smiles....chiquita

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 9:31:00 PM
    P.D.--How are you doing? Why are you leaving? Are you just taking a break? Do you have writer's block? I think you are holding out on a big secret, and I feel left out....see you around sometime in the future!~Chris

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 12:31:00 PM
    Heya P.D., just re-reading some poetry of my favorite people here on the Soup! GET AWAY FROM THE EDGE!!

  1. Date: 8/21/2010 9:18:00 AM
    stll my fav babe. you really got it all down good.this one really makes me smile.xooxxoxoolove you

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 9:01:00 AM
    Wow! What a Manifesto! Say, I was wondering, since you know everything then do you think you could tell tonight's Lotto numbers?:) I miss you too Chatter Bug!

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 10:07:00 AM
    it was like nuclear devistation to a nation of fools and fiends imbred and insane.it comes with knowledge and power. the kind you can;t find in school or in guntowers. it devours and destroys. it regurgitates the rage and it's never over joyed. i liked it

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 11:25:00 AM
    LoTS oF MooD EMoTIoN. TO MANY GooD oNES. A CRAZY PATH IF U ASK ME. 2 MANY GooD LINES. * A curse a gift with ability to know everything, illusions of feeling it with an emphasis so useless you can not admit* LoVE IT. GREDDY oN THE WISE oNE, 2 KNOW IT ALL, N WANT 2 FEEL IT ALL. EVERY PoWER IS RISKY. No MATTER DoES THE EDGE WALKER REALLY EXIST. PooR PooR HE oR SHE TO CARRY SO MUCH WEIGHT. SID LIKE U SAID EVEN THEY FALL.-SKAT

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 7:39:00 AM
    oh, and i think i may look on poetry pub again, and look on your photos, to see if i can guess which one you are.lol.just for fun.the only woman i see on there is one with tattoo's on her back, and chest area. you pretty brown haired, brown eyed PRINCESS LeeAnn(: i play video games & sports too! i hope you didn't mind me calling you that.lol oh, and sorry about your enigma vibes! -always a friend

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 10:21:00 AM
    This is a powerful write Your Majesty. You should feel honored if all don't get it's exact meaning. That's the beauty of poetry. It's all open to interpritation to the reader and you've done a marvelous job here. This can go in so many directions. You have a great flair for many forms of poetry. I envy you. I'm stuck in rhyme all the time. Best Wishes Always, Kidster.

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 10:21:00 PM
    Indeed there are those who walk life on the edge, daring to face what may, refusing to join the "norm", watched, admired and yet I think also feared is what I'm taking from your write. Very thought provoking. I like that. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Best wishes, Caroline.

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