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Beyond Ocean Depth

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Beyond Ocean Depth

       Beyond Ocean Depth

7 miles carried off by ocean waves
No one is there to save me on my last days

Waking up with seaweed in my mouth
Aimlessly  traveling down south

The question I do not dare to ask
A journeys life ending my task

I see no butterflies, on my endless walk
Crossing shadows with a tormented talk

With no fear to all that appears
Reaching out to open a door, suddenly it disappears 

Staring  right before evils eye's
A slow motion drift drying off my cries

Pacing myself at the edge of all things
Entering a "Devil's realm" of only the  Ying

A low beam within the sun
Stepping back in a sandbox of fun

My life then dragged me right back into quicksand
Where as a child she let go of my hand

Wondering deeper in my own invented abyss
Where I followed a  kiss no one could resist

Without the guilt to grasp for air
I then observed something no one should bare

My body in front of me lost in the ocean drift
Hiding away at the bottom of oil mist

The sadness hit me harder when reliving my life in a flash
Knowing exactly  when my life hit its first crash

Drowning in the depth like an ocean spill
A careless destine joining those who also wrote of their will

           SKAT
          6-7-10

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  1. Date: 11/24/2013 12:23:00 AM

    Hi my dearest sis Skat! Coming back to read & enjoy again this poem of urs. I've got more time 2day @ soup. This is my 2nd time to read it and loving it so much as always. A n outstanding masterpiece w/c extraordinarily & very creatively crafted by U. Kudos & hugging this again in every way. TYSM! Hope u're always doing fine. TYSM also for your nice comments on my poem for Saver. Have a great wkend! Pls. say Hi to our dearest sis Linda for me pls. TY! Biggest hugs! lovem4evrLeo

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 2:29:00 PM

    This sounds like one of those bad dreams that you just can't wake up from. Except, it's reality...An awesome poem with amazing imagery!...Thank you for all of the great comments, SKAT! They are very much appreciated! :)

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 5:31:00 AM

    This was high engaging Skat.Kudos on this one.

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 6:57:00 PM

    This is so amazing & highly creative/imaginative write my dearest Skat! I'm so glad to drop by here this morning to read one of your masterpieces/gems! Hugging you warmly with so much joy & gratefulness. Thank you, thank you so much! Wishing you & your love ones & family all the best in life! Have a blessed weekend! May God bless you all always! lovem4ever, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 6:32:00 PM

    SKay, Wonderful imagination with being hauled off into the sea for miles, reminds me of the Life of Pi, but so much nicer in poetry.

  1. Date: 10/29/2010 7:18:00 AM

    STUNNING!!! (";)

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 1:54:00 AM

    That is really good, hope mine turn out as good as this. From PoemBlast P.S. Hope to be reading more when i get chance.

  1. Date: 7/23/2010 4:22:00 AM

    mmmm so creative with laced with original metaphors...^_^ v

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 10:48:00 PM

    lVery imaginative Irma. Thanks for your commnets on my poem. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 9:09:00 PM

    cool poem! Irma! and thanks for the comments! jimbo

  1. Date: 7/14/2010 7:29:00 PM

    we all feel adrift at times...good one! Irma! and thanks for your feedback! jimbo

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 7:16:00 AM

    Wow, awesome imagery Irma -rgds Wilma

  1. Date: 7/2/2010 11:24:00 PM

    EXCELLENT poetry -- captivating. A double thanks for sharing it! :D -Grace

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 7:58:00 PM

    Wow, I don't know how to explain this but I am going to give this my best try. There is something about your writing that makes me want to reread it, it is intriging and adventurous for only a few short lines of a peom, I loved it! .... Allison

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 8:31:00 AM

    Great lines ...I feel such abandoment and insecurity ... Love this read sarah x

  1. Date: 6/24/2010 10:22:00 PM

    IRma are you ok? haven't heard from you in ages!!

  1. Date: 6/23/2010 12:02:00 PM

    has someone wrote on georgia yet? I would like to have it if possible for the contest. thanks

  1. Date: 6/22/2010 3:15:00 PM

    are you doing okay, Irma. no poems for a while. just stopped by to see how a poet friend was doing. take care, & have a nice night.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 6/22/2010 11:02:00 AM

    you have soup mail...

  1. Date: 6/22/2010 10:53:00 AM

    This is beautiful ,Irma! Really enjoyed this one!:)Kisses, Emily

  1. Date: 6/15/2010 8:51:00 PM

    Well-written.

  1. Date: 6/14/2010 7:22:00 AM

    Great write!!!!!!

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 7:44:00 PM

    Soup mail

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 12:36:00 AM

    sounds so emotional, Irma. i can understand where you are coming from when you speak of how it can hit you when sadness takes its toll on you. it can change a lot, if we don't try and make it better, at least for a small while until the things we need to focus on are complete, or at least well. i hope you are doing great. have a beter night..Irma. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 6/12/2010 11:25:00 PM

    I see LInda is asking "where you be" as well as me! Hope you are ok, IRma. I never got an answer to my question yet, if you had Utah represented or not. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 10:08:00 AM

    This is wonderful. Water is always cleansing. You could always yell for help if you can't swim. Poseidon God of the sea may be nearby you; the Sirens may also guide you to safety with their songs. Blessings, Joseph

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 6:38:00 AM

    Gotcha sweetie... understand ... hope u have a wonderful weekend.. with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 8:24:00 PM

    Where u be my sweet Irma as we continue to enjoy this write so very much? busy ..yes am sure.. my eyes are perfect now...just to update ..my surgeries both went well and had to say "hi" and let u know my BBF... with luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 7:14:00 AM

    Hey, Irma, was Utah taken for your contest yet? Let me know if you happen to have a Utah spot and I could try it then! HOpe you are having a nice week. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 4:04:00 AM

    Very expressive and emotive write..Like the couplet format...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

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