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Enchanted Summer (Reversed Etheree)

Sunflowers imitate the sun’s bright hue; 
birds take flight in sunny skies of blue.   
Trenchant traces seen from the hill    
view joy below, peaceful, still.    
Solstice comes without sound 
where peach trees abound   
in summer’s blush. 
Soon autumn
breezes 
blow.    


For Andrea Dietrich's "Etheree Me" Contest

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  1. Date: 6/21/2010 6:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Connie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 12:07:00 AM

    Hi Connie :)--first time I read this, I already fell in love with it, so I wasn't surprised this placed so high! Congrats on your 2nd place win :) -nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 8:07:00 PM

    Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 6:51:00 PM

    I love the touch of autumn’s breeze against my cheek. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 5:39:00 PM

    How about that BIG win...you're the bomb!!! congrad's gal friend! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 9:26:00 AM

    This is excellent! "Sunflowers imitate the sun’s bright hue"- great line! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 7:15:00 AM

    This is truly beautiful Lconnie. I like this reversed from. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 3:37:00 AM

    Guess what, Connie. I chose YOURS as second place in the contest. Congratulations!! It is just awesome and you know me TOO well, what I like. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 8:08:00 PM

    Sounds like a peaceful, beautiful day in late summer. well written Connie. good fortune in the contest....cheers Margaret

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 4:55:00 PM

    What a very inspiring etheree, Connie :) I really liked how you also made it rhyme, wow you sure made writing one seem so effortless--I definitely felt the "enchantment of summer" in this one--I'm sure this would do so well in Andrea's contest ;) --nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 4:20:00 AM

    Nice thoughts on enchanted summer. Good luck in the contest