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Darkest Pain

This barren emptiness that
tears at my soul.
This overwhelming sorrow,
that keeps me from being whole.
This desperate starvation 
that stabs at my heart.
This hunger for love,
that is tearing me apart.
These falling tears,
My deepest fears,
all coming true
like a vision in then
night coming through,
Me without you.
The deepest saddest remorse
when at last reality takes coarse
and heartache is set into motion
with the most powerful force.
long painful goodbyes,
tears falling from sad eyes,
fall like rain,
during my deepest darkest pain.








Sarah Comstock
8/28/99

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  1. Date: 6/6/2010 12:05:00 PM

    This is really good, Sarah. Really nice rhyme scheme.