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Alone

Need to look around;
For someone in the crowd.
To look at me and see;
What so achy?
And always make me burn ;
So bad no one really concern.
Even if you try to live alone;
Make sure that you will be easily blown.
Tears by tears flooded; 
All I see faces in cold-blooded.
“Save me please.” I cried;
What I found people running and hide.
Looking from side to side;
Fog everywhere; I thought that I went blind.
 I tried to open my eyes so wide;
“No one found.”

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  1. Date: 6/6/2010 10:42:00 PM

    A Powerful read. Roger

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 10:29:00 PM

    sorry i meant Hanan

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 10:26:00 PM

    A bit sad but well written thank you for sharing Hassan.

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 4:32:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Hanan. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 6:20:00 PM

    Nice thoughts on isolation