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WIPE OUT

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WIPE OUT

I wish I could erase  some of my past
Make a bigger and brighter future fast
Erase the pain and become whole
Erase the rain and the snow
Erase those days I felt like an ass


FOR ERASER CONTEST

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  1. Date: 6/7/2010 6:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Paula's contest Faleshia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 12:12:00 PM
    haha, Love that last line. I'd like to erase those days too. Congratulations, Faleshia. Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 10:58:00 AM
    Congrats on your win too Faleshia.....Awesome Limerick......Larry

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 5:12:00 PM
    Congrats on the win

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 4:47:00 PM
    Colngratulations. Great entry. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 3:18:00 PM
    Congrats Faleshia on your HM in the Eraser contst with this neart write so fine.. glad to see your name up in lights... enjoy a special honor.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 12:55:00 PM
    Got a chuckle out of the ending. I'm sure there's times when all of us have felt this way. Best wishes in the contest with this one. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good weekend. Karen

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 12:41:00 PM
    cute, enjoyed, thanks for the smile,..Sidney LeeAnn

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 12:18:00 PM
    LOL Cute limerick, Faleshia. There are times we'd all like to erase from our past. The last line was very funny! Best wishes for the contest. Love, Carolyn