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Save me

Save me
I’m lost and I’m losing me
Save me
I just want to be
Save me
Show me the way
Save me
I need you to stay
Save me
And find for me my lost myself
Save me
I want the freedom not the wealth
Save me
Show me how to be happy again
Save me
Just one time be my friend
Save me
I don’t love or like you anymore
But you can
Save me
And you’ll be the one who I’ll adore
So save me
Because you’re the only one I got
Please, save me!
Actually I hate you a little bit but
You 
can
save me.

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  1. Date: 7/4/2010 5:28:00 AM

    Emotions running wild, will he save you? >> James

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 7:12:00 AM

    This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Zuzanna. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 9:03:00 PM

    Good show of emotion in this poem. And I like the repetition of certain lines. Chris.

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 2:29:00 PM

    i hope the pain you feel does go away. i like the intensity of your work, keep going forward and thank you, chuck