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A Unique Proposal

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A Unique Proposal

Forget your worries
When you're with me
Nothing else matters
All that matters
Is that you love me unconditionally
Open up to me
I am your diary
And your secrets I won't tell
They're safe with me
Lay your head on me
I am your pillow
Let my steady heartbeat
Put you to sleep
All these things
My lover whispered to me
Before I fell asleep
By morning though
He had disappeared
Not leaving a note
Or the slightest clue 
To where he could be
Then I got a phone 
And he said
Without you I can't breathe
With you things are perfect
I know I left unexpectedly
And I pray you forgive me
For before I see you cry
I'd rather die
I promise to be back soon
And to marry you

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  1. Date: 6/4/2010 4:55:00 AM
    Hopeful yet sneaky...take care.

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 9:18:00 PM
    Really very unique proposal full of passionate feelings emotions