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Counting On You

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Counting On You

When ever the time comes
I guess it should mean a 
certain freedom; the kind we 
get from writing a poem, the
kind that flows from the instrument
instrumental peace, whatever it may be
It could be the winds that stirs the sea
maybe the sun that shines on you and me.

We hope to see each other there
blowing along the lines of the marble
with eyes like the owl; seeing in the dark
To release some kind of light.

I'm talking about poetry
and all it's unique forms
and how it balanced some piece
of mind, brought the morning
and all its warmth
Before a rugged door.





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  1. Date: 5/25/2011 12:04:00 PM
    Really good Derrick and i wish you all the best in your writing career.Marvel Godwyn

  1. Date: 11/14/2010 12:05:00 PM
    Awesome imagery in this one Derrick.. Much enjoyed ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 4:08:00 PM
    Congratulations..Sara

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 9:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Derrick. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 5:12:00 PM
    Beautiful imagery in a well-written verse, Derrick. Goes to my favs. ...Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 8:37:00 AM
    Ahhh Lovely thoughts on poetry congrates on being featured this week at the soup love Jayne

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 8:34:00 AM
    It sure does. Very nice write! Congrats on your poem being featured this week. Caroline.

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 6:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Derrick. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 7:35:00 PM
    Congrats Derrick on your featured poem this week on the soup... a nice one to share with us all..luv..

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 4:14:00 PM
    Interesting write and yeah, it is a freedom. Freedom of expressing our souls, our minds and thoughts in constructive, eloquent ways that can actually really beguile a reader and inspire. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Have a nice evening yourself. Caroline.

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 5:31:00 AM
    Great write in this one...That poetry is so touching of our souls...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 2:24:00 AM
    Smile! "Hello Talented Young Man!!" ~ I hope that life has been treating You very wonderfully! And its good to see not only Yourself again, but also the fact that You are still searching that bright light soul of Yours and blessing lives with Your gifted words!! "Beautiful Write Derrick" ~ "Much Love & Warmth To You & Yours," John! Smile, "Bye Dear Brother!":)

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 6:36:00 PM
    Very creative, Derrick. Outstanding write. Thanks for your comments.

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 2:19:00 PM
    derrick, you have a marvelous way with imagery. I am so happy to have read this today! I am wondering if maybe you mixed up the piece/peace words. did you mean the standard meaning of "peace of mind" like a calmness in one's mind? It could be you meant a fragment of one's mind too, so it could actually work both ways with that one! thanks for commenting on my poem, I hope to read many more of your poems.LUv, andrea