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Adam's Apple Of His Eye .

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Adam's Apple Of His Eye .

 Say Lady , it's hard to believe
 With this serpent tugging my sleeve
 Saying " head for the chapel
 Here's a nice juicy apple
 Ring her bell , it's now New Years Eve " .

 So , Sweet Rib , what is your name ?
 " I'm your Eve , with no in-laws to blame .
 So , well done my boy
 Lets go forth .... multiply.
 But , that fig leaf's too small for your shame ".

 It's a biblical thing , not a fable
 As our sons sat around our new table
 Each others bad nemesis
 Listening to Genesis
 Discovering Cain wasn't " able " .

 Our Garden Of Eden was class
 As it shimmered with silver and brass .
 But the Lord said " lets go .
 Here's a rake and a hoe .
 Clear the weeds , and that snake from the grass ".

Dedicated to my 2 favorite Eves : Christmas & New Years ..

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  1. Date: 4/6/2013 4:03:00 PM
    rereading some of your awsome limericks today, Sean!

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 6:20:00 AM
    this is funny also, love it! You are getting professional my friend!

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 9:36:00 AM
    Just to think we could have been at rest all this time. Smile! I loved your metaphors and imagery, Sean. It all worked quite well in your verse. Thanks for your gracious comment today. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 10:44:00 AM
    This is a great, witty write, Sean! Soup Mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 12:53:00 AM
    A nice light touch Sean,no easy groups in the Heiniken I see.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 3:42:00 PM
    I like this one! Sweet Rib?! I wish that I had thought of that! Cain wsn't able has a caustic wit! Nice job! Thank you as always, Gerard

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 1:10:00 PM
    Congrat Sean,Delightful and original. Celene.

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 12:44:00 AM
    Congrats on your win in the contest. I like the juxtaposition of Cain and able and clearing the snake in the grass. Dan C

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 1:23:00 PM
    Hey, this must have been a late entry. I thought I had seen them all. I really liked this and that was great fun dedicating them to Christmas and New years EVE! LUv, andrea ps CONGRATS!

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 12:30:00 PM
    Sean, amazing poetry Wow! - many congratulations on your win with this terrific piece in Linda-Marie's contest >> James

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 11:59:00 PM
    Excellent work here, Sean! Congratulations on your deserved recognition in Linda Marie's contest! The dedication is hilarious! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 5:26:00 PM
    Congrats on your win in the contest! I already mentioned how much I enjoyed this poem....took this blockhead the 2nd time around to even realize that it was all done in Limericks! Well done. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 5:15:00 PM
    Congrats for the third place win

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 4:38:00 PM
    Congrats Sean on your third place win in my ADAM in Eden contest with this dynamic write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 1:06:00 PM
    This is so cool, enjoyed the Limerick. LoL, to the dedication of your 2 favorite Eves, enjoyed and have yourself a wonderful Memorial Day,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 12:32:00 PM
    Terrific presented a whole, unique and different direction for the Contest!! I love your interpretation...very well done!! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 11:59:00 AM
    Sean, You are a comic genious Déirdre

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 11:09:00 AM
    LUV LUV LUV ..good luck in my contest.. very unique and innovative Sean dear... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 9:39:00 AM
    Very clever and witty response to the contest! And you dedicate this poem to Christmas and New Year's Eve....what a clever one you are. Chris.