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blood in my eyes

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blood in my eyes

Blood in my eyes 
I still refuse to cry 
I still refuse to be a victim
To the blood in my eyes 

Why should I?
Try!
When every time I try to fly
I fall
Why should i?
Give!
When there’s no one there to take
Because their all fake.
Why do I?
Try!
When every relationship I’m in 
Breaks 
Why can’t I?
Die!
Cause now it seems like all I’m doing 
Is bleeding 

Blood in my eyes 
I still refuse to cry 
I still refuse to be a victim
To the blood in my eyes 

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  1. Date: 6/7/2010 4:40:00 PM
    There is hope in this in that one refuses to be a victim and go on with their life...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 12:48:00 PM
    I like the circulatory pattern in this poem. The beginning and the ending linked together very well. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph