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  1. Date: 6/28/2010 8:47:00 PM
    Coming back to this one that I really like so much!! HI, Lynette!! and thanks for being such a sweet kid. Hey, what ever happened to you know who??? ( I miss her!!)

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 2:51:00 PM
    lol, i got the blocking part on your comment. It was the perfect part for you. Many times I read your poetry and get this feeling of lost, or empty, hey even sad. Like the one where the mother would not return at dawn ever. You see i'm not even reading your poetry and i got that enigma vibes all over shame on you,.always a friend ,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 7:43:00 PM
    My Dearest Sister Spirit, Lynn. When I first this Masterpiece of POETRY, I thought I should Write a POEM about LENORE'S Green eyes in exactly the same rhythm and syllables as this. but that would be Plagerizing YOUR POETIC TALENT I am sorry I have not Written sooner I Had A stroke a Month ago and have Partial use of my right arm it takes FOREVER to write a Comment. I appreciate YOUR Gracious Comments YOU are the Spirit of a TRUE Sister I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 5:40:00 PM
    sounds very emotional...We are back in town. I am trying to catch up on my PS--thanks for your comments.

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 7:40:00 AM
    thankxxx Lynette your sweet comments are always so perfect and needed right on time for me to read... my luv and I go through a lot and he thinks himself unworthy that anyone should luv him as I do ... its a guy thing... and I feel his torment so much .. try to help.. so I put it on paper and glad u understood where I am coming from.. still having fun in the sun today and tomorrow.. hope u have a safe and happy holiday weekend..luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 4:20:00 AM
    A very strong step toward Greek Philosophy, lol. The next time I see Aphrodite at the swimming pool, I assure you that I will turn my eyes the opposite direction, lolol Terry

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 8:25:00 PM
    HI,Lynette, thanks for responding to my poem. My hubbie is not so bad these days. He has his ups and downs! Like most men I would say. When are you gonna post a new poem? LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 2:30:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...I have been out of town on vacation so I am trying to catch up on my comments...I have been writing just over a year now...I feel that I need to write something everyday but sometimes it doesn't flow...It has to do with my having the TIA last year...I am lucky to be alive and not left with the handicaps of a person who had a stroke...Sara

  1. Date: 5/28/2010 2:00:00 PM
    something about hazel eyes. Gods special gift. john

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 10:36:00 PM
    Great imagery -Victorias

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 12:00:00 PM
    I am back here again. I saw your comment regarding the 'fifth' stanza of 'Both sides of the track.' I realize that I shouldn't use that word.... I ask one of my mentors everytime about that word. He is an 80 year-old Black man(he likes the word Black--he doesn't care for African American as much as others)He was around before the rights movement. Anyway, everytime I ask him for guidance, he tells me to use the word....that it is important part of the poem. I apologize if it offends you. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 8:32:00 AM
    A unique Personification you have here Lynette. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 10:02:00 PM
    Your poem is not quite my style, but a good write none the less,,,,,,,,,,,,,you are right, the Devil cannot do it alone, but he can't if we have God around..thanks danny

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 6:37:00 PM
    This one is pretty cool, LYnette. I like that little phrase, drippy drops!! thanks for your comment tonight. LUv ya, andrea

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 4:36:00 PM
    Unique and beautifully written Lynette.. a flowing river of enticement... yes my boyfriend drives me bananas.. one day he is up ..the next down.. one day happy ..the next .not... one day positive ..the next negative... I go nuts ..and if I did not luv him so much he would have been history sweetie..haha.. luv.. and thankxdxx for your gracious comments on my poetry today.. luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 12:53:00 PM
    well ddoneee,Lynette, this is what i am talking about the Enigma girl. nice to see you posting. You must love the name or color of jade you use it on some of your poems, supprriizzing on the ending, posted a new one today,lol,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 10:03:00 AM
    Quite a bewitching poem, Lynette. So many compelling images that make this girl's eyes shine! Well done. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 10:00:00 AM
    What a weird and coolio poem here. The personification is really well done....Hazel eyes are defianetly the most mysterious and beautiful of them all....but then there are also those feline-sculpted, caramel ones, or those bright b....wait, I am getting ahead of my self here! Ha ha! Enjoyed this poem a lot. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 8:53:00 AM
    Smile, "Where The Drippy Drops Fall...." ~ Smile, what a lovely original verse that is! ~ "Hello Dear Gifted Lynette," what a flowing and pretty poem this is here dear! Spoken within bold and upper case words for exclamation, and affect, perhaps!? I hope that life has been treating you very wonderfully and, filling your world with its bright! Smile, "Beautiful Poem," of an enigma, painted, in pretty colours! "May Your Day Be Touched, By Warmth & Light," Always, John! ~ "Bye":)