Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer


Comments Inbox

 

Double Disappointment

I woke up in rapture, when she started to sing.
Naughty whispers in my ears, “Someone’s coming”
My ecstatic view;
A child is due!
Then she continues, “My mother’s visiting”

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 11/11/2010 6:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on going into the second round..Sara

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 8:47:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Nitesh. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 3:52:00 PM

    Congradulations on having your poem featured Nitesh, I am pleased to have read this, enjoyed, and best wishes to your upcoming days..P.D.

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 10:15:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Nitesh. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 11:57:00 AM

    Congrats Nitesh on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all this holiday weekend.. with luv..

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 12:45:00 PM

    You made me laugh with this one :) rgds WN

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 5:40:00 AM

    Got a good laugh from this one. Wonder how he felt about his mother in law visiting. Love, Carolyn