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Below is the poem entitled "10:54pm" which was written by poet Derek Ortiz. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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i feel cold and torned
cant say nothing to no'one
cant speak loud
not a single minute to breath
cant find help in my own home
i just dont see light ahead my road
gambling the whole chest with soul and heart
no fall of ideal
i need time to think
to feel
burn me down

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  1. Date: 5/28/2010 2:47:00 PM
    I like this post. im not sure if my posts are any better then youres haha(:

  1. Date: 5/28/2010 2:15:00 PM
    This is really soul felt.