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  1. Date: 4/11/2011 6:38:00 AM

    I have stopped by to read some of your excellent poetry today Lynette. I hope to be back soon to read them again. I wish you the best with your writing always. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 2:12:00 AM

    Like how you put your emotions in the poem, I guess that is the best therapy to have. Like they say nothing lasts forever, its sad but what can we do?

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 5:46:00 PM

    Lynette this is very good , sorry to see the upset you express!

  1. Date: 6/12/2010 10:19:00 PM

    thank you for the commet Lynette,,no new poems,,,nice to see you on line ,,,if you have time can you please check out my newest slam to Chris A. than he wrote an awesome just for me,..Have a nice one Lynn,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 7:34:00 PM

    I ve already comment on this poem, Lynette. Thanks tho, for your other comment. Yes, so many time the human will use his anger as an excuse to set a life long curse in motion, the cruelty of an act that is never though of again, by these we curse our own children. For they will be facing the paracitic seeds we sow. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 2:41:00 AM

    Beautiful...I just love a passionate romance poem:) Kisses, Emily

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 10:19:00 PM

    this one is wonderful, Lynette. Oh, my hunger poem was not about "starving for food" hunger. Well, I'll see ya tomorrow, little lady, "the vampire slayer" ahhaha

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 4:58:00 PM

    So glad u enjoyed a little humor in the Garden of Eden . "Sweetheart" style... appreciate your sweet comments ... new blog on yummy desserts if u want to be part of my sweetie poll...luv... Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 2:08:00 PM

    i like to answer these types of poems. but for this one i do not have the answer except that you are right to still love. it is your duty. every relationship has a "NAG" he just beat you to it. John H Loving III

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 9:02:00 AM

    A spiceless romance of days gone by, Lynette? The Agape bliss in a kiss, once gone will certainly be missed.Smile. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 8:13:00 AM

    Good write, sometimes it takes a long time to find the right love, but when one has found it it feels right...thanks on Granny...me I just see one side here the Granny, but that is me...thanks Danny

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 6:41:00 AM

    Finding the true Agape with someone with a special gift, but there is stimulating sadness in this poem, Lynette. How could someone love truly and then have it become false later? Much to think about in this compelling poem. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 2:11:00 AM

    I really like the wording in this poem. I read it several times, and enjoyed it more each time I read it. Thanks for your comment on my poem, Urban Pipe Dream. The poem has multiple meanings. Keep up the good work on your poems. Terry

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 10:31:00 PM

    THAT IS CRAZY LYNETTE I ALREADY PUT A COMMENT ON THIS ONE. WOW MAYBE IT DID NOT GO THRU. WELL I WAS JUST CHECKING TO SEE IF YOU HAD ANYTHING NEW. A REAL GOOD WRITE ABOVE. A BIT SAD BUT AT YOUR BEST. HAVE YOURSELF A GOOD ONE,,SKAT

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 10:24:00 PM

    oh yes sorry my third time, good one by the way. sorry i have not posted nothing lately. i am afraid if i write it will be on a hurt feeling. lol i would not want no one to know i got a feeling hurt out here in the not so poet world. yes and i might slam my friend so i just better not write for a while. before i come up with mean things that might hurt me or my friend. lol. not a joke. if I do or do not post any thing you are always welcomed just to say HI! have a good night yourself,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 10:19:00 PM

    thank you my young friend, just got back on line. glad to see you have something new yourself. this poem above does not sound like the enigma you. i sense someone drifted away from you. wow! lynette, you sure can word an empty place pretty good. love the silence line, but if i know you. You are to smart for this one guy. you will jump on your toes quick. hopefuly it is just a write, always a friend,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 10:10:00 PM

    soupmail.

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 9:47:00 PM

    a lovely one Lynette, sad and lonely on the feelings but another good write from YOU!. love it and enjoyed it,..p..d

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 9:28:00 PM

    this is beautiful! yes i love her dearly but she no longer is in my life if you read the end of chapter eight it talks about it there i just want a girl tht will understand me =(

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 7:52:00 PM

    Elegant words Lynette and a new favorite for this "Sweetheart" tonight... such depth and emotion .. such pain and heartache...such longing in your lines of luv... a wonderful read... luv.. Linda-Marie