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A way to freedom

Bright enough when you call for peace;
the bonds around you would release.
looking for your path without a lease;
freedom passes by as a swift breeze;
try to catch it before it would cease.
...belief, faith. love and care.
the meaning of one's rights around to share.

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  1. Date: 6/7/2010 4:30:00 PM

    All is well english wise on this one...I would call it Couplet form though. Light & love

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 11:04:00 AM

    I cant help but love the msg in this one. Nice work ~Rain

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 12:25:00 PM

    Excellent message in your poem Hanan, many congratulations on your 6th place in Matt's contest >> James

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 3:59:00 AM

    Nice poem.

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 4:06:00 AM

    Nice thoughts well expressed

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 3:16:00 AM

    Excellent way to start my day, enjoyed this read with my morning coffee.

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 2:51:00 AM

    spoken out loud love the message in your poetry this morning, enjoyed and have yourself a nice day,..p..d