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Worlds Apart

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Worlds Apart

We're in a crazy
Falling fantasy
Dancing on the lazy
Crazy side of me

As we start to spin
Dizzy as can be
Begins a passion
Eyes can't see

Taking some time
To tease and chase
Minds so sublime
While senses race

We chance the sin
That's in our heart
And dance within
A screen apart

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  1. Date: 6/17/2010 7:16:00 AM
    I really like the flow of this poem and the twist at the end. And thanks for your comment.

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 12:53:00 AM
    A telling last line Mitch.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 6:51:00 PM
    BEAUTIFUL HOW THIS LOVE IS COMBINED, AND FROM A SCREEN APART, DOES THAT MEAN YOU GUYS KEEP THE LOVE GOING THROUGH THE INTERNET, AWE WHAT A SWEET WRITE

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 7:39:00 AM
    What an interesting and sensual expression ...in this modern world, such emotions can be expressed without ever meeting face to face. Well done!

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 3:46:00 AM
    A very wonderful enjoyable write.

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 2:43:00 AM
    Good morning,amazing Mitch, nice poem, let it flow. It is nice to know we can still get in touch with the ones we love who are apart,..p.d.