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Deicide

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Deicide

 I close my eyes to hide the pain inside,
I close my eyes to die inside.

  eyes are closed so i can hide,
I close my eyes to die inside.

 Within my mind I search inside,
finally in time I've died inside.

 I close my eyes to hide inside,
 with  eyes closed i die inside
 
Finally in time I die inside,
 only in time its deicide.

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  1. Date: 5/24/2010 3:19:00 PM
    I like the play on words in this poem. It flows very well and is creative. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 5:22:00 AM
    A fine introspective poem.

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 5:03:00 AM
    strong words which you have written here, nice write

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 4:43:00 AM
    DEEP WRITE, I LIKE THE WAY YOU WROTE THE FIRST TWO LINES, SO MUCH TO HIDE YET YOU KEEP IT MIND AND TO YOURSELF, ENJOYED