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lover lover

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lover lover

Mr. Lover lover  
So smooth 
Filled with charisma.
Acting like there’s a man in ya
Sleeping with a different girl every night.
Hunting for young ones 
Knowing they wont put up a fight.
Taking away their innocents,
Knowing that they have no confidence 

Mr. bombastic 
Your shyt is not fantastic 
It not romantic 

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  1. Date: 5/25/2010 4:48:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Darshanique. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 12:26:00 PM
    This is excellent. I like the rhyming pattern and the essence of the words. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Blessings, Joseph